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Poetry by Blake Steele

written in France, 1994

 

                         A...

                         ABOUT THE PIO RETREAT HOUSE VISION

                         A FUNERAL IN FRANCE

                         A CHRISTMAS SONG FROM BRITTANY

                         A MEDITATION ON FRANCE

                         A POEM FOR MANY YOUNG FRENCH WOMEN

                         A SONG FROM SAULAGES, FRANCE

 

                         C...

                         COMMENTS UPON GOD FROM FRANCE

 

                         G...

                         GOD IS CONCERNED WITH A MAN'S FAITH

                         GOD LOVES MY BODY LIKE HE LOVES

                                   THE BLAMELESS STONES

 

                         I...

                         I HAVE A CHANCE TO BE RESPECTABLE

                         I LAY WITH THE CROWN OF MY HEAD

                                       AGAINST OLD, CASTLE STONE

                         IMAGES FROM LUCERAM, FRANCE

                         IN THE END, A SOCIETY IS JUDGED BY THE STATE

                              OF ITS ELDERLY

                         I STOOD TODAY WHERE DEBUSSY WALKED

                                  FOR INSPIRATION

                         I WILL SING OF FRANCE

 

                         L...

                         LISTENING AT FORT LA LATTE - BRITTANY, FRANCE

 

                         M...

                         MOON LIGHT AT VAN GOGH'S GRAVE

                         MY LIFE POURED BACK UPON ME

                         MY SOUL PRAYS BEST

 

                         N...

                         NOTRE DAME des SABLONS

 

                         P...

                         POEMS FROM FORT LA LATTE, BRITTANY, FRANCE

 

                         T...

                         THE ABBAYE SENANQUE

                         THE CIRCLE'S COMPLETION

                         (At a hunting lodge in France)

                         THE COMMISSION

                         TO THE RARE SOUL THAT CARES AND BREAKS THROUGH

 

                         U...

                         UPON A SPIRITUAL TRAGEDY

 

                         V...

                         VINCENT

 

                         W...

                         WHEN I BECOME THE EARTH'S OWN LOVE

 

                         Last Poem in file: ABOUT THE PIO RETREAT HOUSE

                        

 

 

Blake Steele

P.O. Box 201

Bend, OR 97709

503-382-2864

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                               NOTRE DAME des SABLONS

                               Provence - Aigues-Mortes

                                

                               St Louis had them build her,

                               stone upon stone,

                               up she arose,

                               a stalwart lady,

                               fit to last ages.

                               Her silent spaces hold

                               a myriad of memories.

                               So many souls,

                               passing through the eras,

                               have felt wondrous things here...

                               perhaps as I have felt today:

                               the memoried stories

                               that make this lady live

                               --and centuries of prayers

                               which have soaked into her stones.

                        

 

                        

 

                        

                         VINCENT

                         St. Paul's, St. Remy De Provence

                                        I.

                         I walked today where a tormented genius walked,

                         where he strove to gather his soul into some

                         semblance of peace.

                         The place was peaceful enough.

                         It might have been peaceful for him then,

                         but unmitigated passions are not easily subdued.

                         I know that if a man

                         does not gain mastery over old passions

                         (the ones with tough roots

                         twisting deeply into his brain),

                         they can warp him into the semblance

                         of a colorful fly--

                         a fly which catches a sensitive eye

                         with rainbows of light on its wing--

                         yet in time, bears a worm which infests carrion.

                         Passions debase us if gone awry...

                         yet, directed a right, they might lift us

                         into a swirl of starlight.

                         Out in the garden

                         I observed that the mad man learned the rough

                         stroke of his brush

                         from the bark of old olive trees...

                         Light was his love--color-laden light!

                         When one loves an element,

                         its essence pours through.

                         His passion for color must have been great

                         --beyond our imagining!--

                         for color grew to such a force through his eyes

                         that it crashed through all normal, mental defenses

                         until light itself drove him mad.

                                        II.

                         I sat for a long time in the dark chapel

                         where he must have often thought and prayed,

                         and sent my voice to echo in the same vault

                         where his voice was raised.

                         I felt he must have been impelled in his work

                         by a great weight of guilt!

                         Love graces us with balance in its ardor,

                         but the soul will pass all extremities

                         striving to appease a shame.

                         Genius needs solid ground from which to launch

                         bright rockets in the night.

                         His ground gave way at last, and strokes of

                         color drowned him in a sea of seething energies.

                         (This poor man passed through a colorful hell

                         on his way to paradise).

                                       *

                         And now, safely distant from his lonely eyes,

                         or the anguished sounds of his raving,

                         our shoes slide upon polished tiles

                         (though his sandals were heavy with clay),

                         as we gaze at the marks of his strident passion

                         --and are dazed!--

                         called to awareness by the flattery of fame

                         to feel for a moment, something beyond paint!

                         And so, we have built him monuments,

                         celebrating the genius which drove him insane.

                        

 

                         

 

 

                         GOD IS CONCERNED WITH A MAN'S FAITH

                         Provence, France - 10/6/94

 

                         God is concerned with a man's faith.

                         It is not by feelings that things are changed

                         except the feelings be driven

                         by forces of faith!

                         Perhaps I learned this in solitude

                         amongst ancient hills--

                         or perhaps by the failures

                         of my feelings.

 

 

 

                        

                         10/7/94

 

 

 

                         COMMENTS UPON GOD FROM FRANCE

 

                         God flies on the wings of the wind

                         through the candy shop of His own creation--

                         tasting everything!

                         And to God, the poetical child,

                         it is deliriously delicious:

                         The piercing purity of starlight;

                         the slow ecstasy of growing grass;

                         the stately, erotic wisdom of the trees;

                         the numbling, fumdubbery of rattling stones.

                         All the flavors dance through His brain,

                         --delighting Him!--

                         amidst a great weight of sadness,

                         as the compassions of His heart

                         brood painfully upon

                         the numb, ruinous nature of men.

 

 

 

                          10/7/94 

 

 

                         UPON A SPIRITUAL TRAGEDY

 

                         I shall write again and again

                         about these truths of God:

                         the poetical child,

                         the passionate lover,

                         the rejected one.

                         The churches of France are dark, depressing

                         relics.

                         Why is there no music reverberating

                         from these ancient stones?

                         Perhaps there has been too much killing;

                         too much pretence of holiness;

                         too much religious hypocrisy.

                         There is a great beauty of spirit missing!

                         There is an essential meaning missing!

                         What remains is the unresolved grief

                         of young girls

                         raped by ravenous warrior monks.

                         What remains are old stones

                         upon which the brains of children

                         were beaten out

                         by the commands of popes.

                         And whose eyes shall gaze through glimmering dark

                         to see visions of justice and beauty

                         in communities of spirit

                         celebrating ancient glories and new frontiers

                         if not the children of rich and vile legacies

                         who are young, poetical lovers...

                         you who are passionate, rejected ones.

 

 

 

 

 

                    THE CIRCLE'S COMPLETION

                    (At a hunting lodge in France)

 

                    I wandered out into sheep fields at night

                    to stand in the wind and gaze up

                    at limitless stars.

                    Then it hit me, as a circle was completed

                    and the energies of a lifetime's worth

                    of longing released.

                               *

                    To spin, to spin in joyous rage